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Haiku#2

Winter belches snow

Mountains groan thunderously

Alpines slide headlong

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  1. January 8, 2012 11:22 am

    Wonderful haiku and imagery! If you haven’t read some of my older haiku and have the time, here is my link: http://lscotthoughts.com/category/haiku/
    Have a wonderful day, Selena~

    • January 8, 2012 11:54 am

      I was just there and wow you have some excellent haikus both traditional and non traditional. I’m looking forward to delving deeper in your treasure chest

      • January 8, 2012 12:00 pm

        Thanks, Selena, and I feel the same about your blog, as well~

  2. Julie Catherine permalink
    January 12, 2012 10:36 pm

    What incredibly strong phrasing in this wonderful Haiku! Your imagery is so good I felt like I was there, could even feel the chill of the winter air. Wonderful! ~ Julie

  3. January 14, 2012 9:24 am

    Thank you Julie,Someone suggested I expand this into a haiku trilogy,which I will be doing soon

  4. Caddo Veil permalink
    March 31, 2012 9:38 pm

    Oh, Lena! This is really strong–I can smell it, hear it, feel compelled to run!!

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